Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2008/08/28
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Felt the same about the shoe lace.
Then thought - hey - this is about shoe laces. ;~)
Also, I'm not fond of PS work on documents (perhaps to a fault).
burning down - h-m-m - don't think so - the light tones here work in
the "tonal balance."
When I consider "asymmetrical balance" (which I do probably do too
much - I drilled it into my students) I generally consider it in
terms of:
tonal (and or color) balance
shape balance
focus balance
line balance
When they all work together - generally the image will appear
visually powerful (even if the subject itself lacks intrinsic power).
?I believe that photography loves banal objects, and I love the life
of objects.? ? Joseph Sudek
Fond regards,
George
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On Aug 28, 2008, at 6:04 PM, Geoff Hopkinson wrote:
> Delightful subtle skin lighting in the third (and a gorgeous little
> sweetie!). I note your disciplined framing (a lesson for me there) and
> meticulous composition again for the shapes. The mirrored adult
> profiles in
> the background are cool, as is the detail of the teddy behind. The
> foot with
> shoelace at left distracts a little for me and the drink above. I
> might try
> burning down and softening left lighter area down to the teddy and
> removing
> the lace. Any thoughts on any of that?